After watching our groups trailer again I have realised that it appears to tell a short story rather than teases the audience as a trailer. They seem to get a lot more of the story told through our footage therefore me and Alice have sat down and decided the changes we need to make in order to improve our trailer. We have come up with a shot list that we will do to create a montage at the end of the trailer to quicken the speed and reinforce the horror genre of the trailer.
The shots we have decided to take are :
- Jess being bundled in the car
-Blood dripping from a knife (makes what happens ambiguous)
-Jess screaming
-Jess running
-A mysterious text message or letter
- Jess trying to phone for help and no answer
-Jess hidden in a cupboard or going into the cupboard
-Point of view shot of her breathing in the cupboard and somebody approaching
I think the montage should end on the cupboard and when the door opens it should either be ending with a bright light over taking the screen or a dark black taking over the screen, the film name will then appear and fade out.
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